Wednesday, November 12, 2014

My Visual Poem



My poem is about the beach. My poem shows the way i really appreciate the beach and the how beautiful the beach can be if you look at it real closely.

I really think the visual really impacts the poem because you get an idea of what i or someone else is talking about. I also think it really impacts it because it gives a visual look about that sentence which gives you a different perspective of the beach and poem. Lastly, it really impacts poem because it feels like you right there and watching the waves and ocean.

My special effects affects the overall meaning by how i put natural sounds because it seems like you actually there sitting there at the beach watching the waves crash. My special effects affects the audience by them really getting hooked because you are looking and hearing about the story which is the poem and imagery. Lastly, my special effects affects the mood by giving you joy because of all the fun and beauty the poem is showing and telling.

When i was all finished with the poem i was satisfied with my poem because it shows and tells enough information to give a good perspective on my thoughts on the beach. I think i could make it better by adding and getting more b-roll. Also i could add a title for the beginning to introduce my poem. Lastly, i think i could of spoked with a little more emotion to express myself and the poem.